...Oinyn...
Vote: 0
✎ Tớ xin chào đón các bạn thành viên đã giành thời gian quí báu của bản thân để tham gia ENGLISH-game do tớ tổ chức♥
✎ Ngay sau đây tôi sẽ thông báo chính xác thể lệ tham gia Vòng loại 1
VÒNG 1: Introduce yourself.
1/ Thể lệ: Ở vòng này sẽ là vòng khởi động cho các bạn nội dung như sau:
► Các bạn sẽ tham gia viết văn với chủ đề: Introduce yourself.
► Nội dung xoay quanh bạn và nơi bạn đang sống hay nói cách khác là quê hương bạn. Bạn sẽ phải viết 1 bài bằng Tiếng Anh (Không dưới 100 từ).
► Tớ sẽ chấm điểm cùng với một số CTV khác của tớ.
► Tiêu chí: Trình bày đẹp, nội dung đạt yêu cầu, ý sáng tạo.
► Ở vòng này tớ sẽ lấy top 25 số người tham gia. Tớ rất mong mọi người sẽ tham gia đầy đủ vì đây có lẽ là lúc mọi người giành thời gian ôn lại kiến thức.
► Vui lòng nêu rõ tên acc cũng như STT khi nộp bài. Vd:
Tên acc: ...Oinyn...
Số thứ tự: 001.
► Tớ sẽ cho các cậu cứ tự nhiên dùng GG dịch nhưng nhớ chú ý phần ngữ pháp là ổn.
► Tớ cấm tuyệt đối việc lấy bài trên mạng nhé nếu tớ phát hiện thì Out ngay nhé đừng có đôi co.
2/Giải thưởng:
- Giải chính:
- Bài văn hay nhất Vòng 1: 20 lingots.
- Bài văn hay top 3: 15 lingots/ người.
- Bài văn hay topic 5: 10 lingots/ người.
Giải phụ:
► Rớt vòng 1: 5 lingots
► Phát hiện ra có người lấy bài trên mạng: 10 lingots
3/Bảng tổng soát:
► iamfw11 : 001 [Đã hoàn thành V1]
► -Bunn. : 002
► J.Mar09 : 003 [Đã hoàn thành V1]
► AKF_2k6 : 004
► -...Fery...- : 005
► -...Bip...- : 006 [Đã hoàn thành V1]
► -...AnhAnh...- : 007 [Đã hoàn thành V1]
► -JoCe : 008 [Đã hoàn thành V1]
► -.Kii.- : 009
► MinhhoangTran2k7 : 010
► Tin...999 : 011
► Nhnc16 : 012
► acesaluffy123 : 013
► -.-Su.Kem... : 014 [Đã hoàn thành V1]
► NIGHT.CORE : 015 [Đã hoàn thành V1]
► -.-Bon-.- : 016 [Đã hoàn thành V1]
► Cong.dang.yeu : 017 [Đã hoàn thành V1]
► -onikri- : 018
► _shii.25 : 019 [Đã hoàn thành V1]
► vngphnghoa1 : 020
► kimmyungsoo-.- : 021 [Đã hoàn thành V1]
► TarinaEsperanza : 022 [Đã hoàn thành V1]
► ThuyLinh2k5 : 023
► Thuc_Angel : 024
► VenusHami : 025 [Đã hoàn thành V1]
► LNguynThuT6 : 026 [Đã hoàn thành V1]
► .J.i.z : 027 [Đã hoàn thành V1]
► HLinh102763 : 028
► ....LinYujin.... : 029 [Đã hoàn thành V1]
► GiaoGiao542 : 030
► hoa888235 : 031
► T_Mint_ : 032 [Đã hoàn thành V1]
►WallTrinh : 033
►.BlackWhite. : 034
►-Dii : 035
►Chris_Chitoge : 036
►tranvangiang6a : 037
►Chj : 038 [Đã hoàn thành V1]
►-Pooh- : 039
►Jenney961245 : 040
►YuuA.h.n : 041 [Đã hoàn thành V1]
►Taehyung-oppa : 042
►hungPGT : 043
►Khanhhuyen312004 : 044
►Maxtroll1 : 045
►MISUZU4ACUTETHDH : 046
►VietAnhTra12 : 047
►Kevin.1218 : 048
►secret_human_2k3 : 049
☒ Cảm ơn các bạn đã giành thời gian để tham gia cũng như chung vui với tớ.
☒ Hãy cố gắng làm thật tốt nhé.
☒ Nếu có gì thắc mắc hay có ý tưởng gì mới thì hãy comment bên dưới nhé tớ sẽ giải đáp.
☒ Have a nice day <333
Thân Oinyn-(☊Oinyn)
2019-01-10T08:03:42Z
...Oinyn... | Vote: 5
- Thông báo: Hiện tại số lượng những người hoàn thành khá thấp nên tạm thời BTC sẽ dời lại vào ngày 13/1 mới tổng kết. Mong mọi người hãy giành thời gian làm bài và gửi sớm nội trong sáng mai. Xin cảm ơn.
~Thân Oin~
2019-01-12T08:00:45Z
HNguyen_ | Vote: 0Bạn ơi, cho mình hỏi 1 cái ạ?? Bạn có ghi lần này viết chủ đề về TA là "Introduce yourself" đúng ko ạ? Nhưng bạn cho phần gợi ý lại là:
► Nội dung xoay quanh bạn và nơi bạn đang sống hay nói cách khác là quê hương bạn.
=> Vì thế mình rất thắc mắc là có nên đổi "yourself" => thành "countryside / motherland" ko hở bạn?? Chứ nếu ko sẽ bị gọi là lạc đề á bạn ơi vì chủ đề đâu có liên quan đến phần gợi ý của bạn đâu?!? Mong bạn xem xét, cảm ơn nhiều ạ~
Phiền bạn onl gmail để kiểm tra tin nhắn của mình đc ko ạ, cảm ơn!
2019-01-12T14:07:41Z
...Oinyn... | Vote: 0
- Ừm về việc đó thì theo tớ ''Introduce yourself'' có nghĩ là giới thiệu về bản thân trong đó cũng sẽ có giới thiệu về nơi mình đang sống. Lí do: nếu giới thiệu về ''countryside'' thì có hơi thu gọn, ý tớ là tớ muốn mở rộng ý ra một chút.
[ Đã xem qua ]
2019-01-13T09:23:59Z
HNguyen_ | Vote: 0Nhưng ý mình là nếu là "yourself" thì phải giới thiệu về bản thân mới là chính chứ nhỉ?!? Còn giới thiệu về nơi mình đang sống chỉ là phần phụ nho nhỏ thôi vì như bạn thấy nếu topic chủ đề cho phần essay là "Introduce yourself" mà lại nói qua phần kia nhiều quá thì sẽ bị coi là lạc đề và mất toi hết điểm á bạn ơi?!?
2019-01-13T09:34:46Z
...Oinyn... | Vote: 0
- Cảm mơn bạn đã góp ý tớ sẽ có những thay đổi riêng. Xin cảm ơn.
2019-01-13T10:24:56Z
HNguyen_ | Vote: 0No problem! ^00^
2019-01-13T10:34:35Z
_Lycc. | Vote: 0
- Tổng kết đuy bạn iêu êii =))
2019-01-13T01:19:06Z
...Oinyn... | Vote: 0
- Tớ sẽ Tổng Kết vào buổi tối 13/1 nhé.
2019-01-13T09:24:29Z
...Oinyn... | Vote: 3
- Thông báo: Thời gian tham gia Vòng 1 ENGLISH-Game đã kết thúc. BTC đang trong quá trình chấm bài khoảng 1h nữa sẽ có kết quả và topic tổng kết sẽ được đăng. Xin cảm ơn.
~Thân Oin~
2019-01-13T10:38:40Z
-Uz- | Vote: 0ukm
2019-01-13T10:55:13Z
-Uz- | Vote: 0lâu quá trời
2019-01-13T11:28:19Z
-...AnhAnh...- | Vote: 0
- Làm bài vào đâu bạn ơi?
Tra trên mạng: 10 lingots? Bộ bạn tặng bạn tra mạng 10 lings à?
2019-01-10T08:50:32Z
...Oinyn... | Vote: 0
- Làm tại đây luôn nhé bạn. Cơ mà hình như có gì nhầm lẫn ấy ạ tớ nói
Phát hiện ra có người lấy bài trên mạng:
chứ đâu như bạn nói? Bạn ko hiểu thật ạ? Tớ tưởng nói tới đó là hiểu được rồi?! Dù sao trên topic tớ cũng nói rõ rồi mà nhỉ :) Không lẽ tớ phải ghiThưởng cho người phát hiện có người lấy bài trên mạng
?2019-01-10T09:03:15Z
-...AnhAnh...- | Vote: 0
- Mik hỉu r
2019-01-10T09:08:12Z
Tieu_Mayy | Vote: 0
Tên acc: J.Mar09
Số thứ tự: 003
Đây là bài của t:
My family have four people such as mom, dad, sister and me. At present, customs and tradition are very important in the life of each person. Like other family, my family also have our own traditions and customs. There is a tradition in our family of seeing the fireworks in on New Year's Eve. Everyone in my family went to the square and watched the fireworks in the night sky. We did that together for every year. In the modern life, there are so many people moving to live in city. Because the city have a lot of people so they can develop the economy for the family. At present, few people live in the countryside. However, I still like living in the countryside. We can run around the vast field, swimming in the rivers, collec many vegetables in the afternoon or in the summer. Morever, we can enjoy the fresh air and peaceful space. The people in the countryside are very kind, generous and friendly. Because they can live a happy life at here. I really enjoy living here, but maybe my future is going to live in the city but I never forget about the time when I lived here. Because this place is so familiar and close to my life.
P/S: E chúc mừng sinh nhật chưa nạ?
2019-01-10T09:18:43Z
...Oinyn... | Vote: 0
- [Duyệt]
Xùy lên mail chúc từ từ đc mak .-.
2019-01-10T09:29:27Z
Binn. | Vote: 0Ave đôi ah ??? Xinh ghê ^0^
2019-01-12T08:22:07Z
-...AnhAnh...- | Vote: 0
Tên acc: -...AnhAnh...-
Số thứ tự : 007
Bài làm:
My neighbourhood is in the countryside. There are three schools, a post office and some shops in my neighbourhood but there isn't a park and a cinema. The streets are narrow but they are clean. The air is fresh too. You can see many trees around here. The people here is friendly, hard-working and smart. And every house has a front yard and a back yard. I like living in my neighbourhood because it is peaceful. In the future, I will make my neighbourhood more beautiful and more modern. I love my neighbourhood very much.
2019-01-10T09:23:59Z
...Oinyn... | Vote: 0
- [Duyệt]
2019-01-10T09:28:55Z
VietuWu | Vote: 0
Tên acc : -JoCe
STT : 008
"Motherland" is the trade body calls for two hours for every one man.That's where we saw by born, grow up and mature.For me, home is beautiful and each time prompted calls home seen in how hard feelings rise movement.Home is a village very abundant.The straight wings, storks, the Princess Bride, green corn this afternoon I horizon to Titus.Village roads zigzag winding, but extremely clean because made of concrete.From there the road clean concrete, we go to school no longer muddy to mud as before.The two-storey house grows up thanks to increasingly innovative.Now in his hometown of children no longer have any more cottages which all have tile House . So October last year, I've received the title of the new country.But that life had more prosper but in the countryside, people still live together in harmony, so emotional.When beginning a new day, the farmers usually brunch place.The crop push Bazaar, talking about the price today.Also we shall call each other in school, with little jokes and talking makes small neighbor villages become tumultuous and full of life.The evening cultural festival, the tool man she also excited to go see and read poetry, storytelling. The kite enough color, shapes up high, forever on the slopes of the windswept dike is probably the photo that I enjoy the most.Hope the dreams of us later will also fly high, fly away like that.Are you hometown appearance change each day and on a richer and more beautiful.I loved his hometown.Thus, after this, despite going away, I will always remember about the homeland.
Mất khá là nhiều thời gian..Haizzz
2019-01-10T09:31:28Z
...Oinyn... | Vote: 0
[Duyệt]
Hì chịu cực xíu mà viết được một bài khá vậy là tâm đắc rồi :)
2019-01-10T09:35:04Z
VietuWu | Vote: 0
- Quá khen ... Mà mình có dùng trang web dịch nên có sai sót thì mong bạn chỉ cho!!
2019-01-10T09:37:54Z
...Oinyn... | Vote: 0
- Tớ sẽ sửa vào hôm tổng kết nhé :)
2019-01-10T09:38:46Z
VietuWu | Vote: 0Phiền bạn đổi tên mình ở trên thành
.jonnew3
đc ko ạ! Mình đổi tên cái nhé!2019-01-10T09:46:17Z
tu2007q | Vote: 0cho mình thamgia với
2019-01-10T11:48:10Z
tu2007q | Vote: 0tham gia ở đâu vậy
2019-01-10T11:44:10Z
...Oinyn... | Vote: 0
- Tại đây luôn nhé bạn.
2019-01-11T05:05:03Z
GiaoGiao542 | Vote: 0tên acc : Giao STT :050 mình tham gia nhé
2019-01-10T12:21:16Z
...Oinyn... | Vote: 0
- Ừm.
2019-01-11T05:04:50Z
.Snail. | Vote: 0
- cậu ơi bạn Pooh chỉ ns là tg xổ số chứ có tham gia game này đâu :)
2019-01-10T12:32:32Z
_Lycc. | Vote: 0
Tên acc : .J.i.z
STT : 027
My family has four people, they are my dad, my mom, my younger brother and me. My family lives in the countryside, our lives here are so peaceful. Life silently passes without many problems. Every member in my family has a routine with the life here, they are all frugal with everything. Especially, people here are very sociable. Whenever someone needs any helps, they even help enthusiastically without scrupling. Every night, I always fly kites, catch fireflies with my village friends. It's very fun. You know, many people left countryside to move to city because it's difficult to have a job here and it's synonymous with difficulty in earning much money. Their lives here are very hard. Nevertheless, I still love living here, it make me feel comfortable when i think of my life. Everything here is very familiar to me. Villagers, nature, atmosphere, animals,...They're the best things to me. Although life in cities is modern, happy, I don't think that I can live happily if I lack my best things. In the future, when I grow up, I will never forget my homeland. It will always inculcate in my mind forever....
2019-01-10T13:54:10Z
...Oinyn... | Vote: 0
- [Duyệt]
2019-01-11T04:53:39Z
_KarRoy-Love_ | Vote: 0
Tên acc: T_Mint_
Số thứ tự: 032
- Bài làm của mình:
I live in the suburbs of Thanh Hoa city. My neighbourhood is very beautiful. Here, the weather is wonderful and the streets aren't crowed so it will be great if I want to go out to ride bike, walk,... There are many shops and small restaurants. They make I feel convenient when I go out. In my neighbourhood, the houses are low but they are large. The houses are surrounded by the fields where people grow rice and vegetables. The food there is very delicous, if you eat them, I sure you won't forget them. At many festivals, my neighbourhood often organizes some traditional games as: tug of war, bamboo dancing,... Special, people in my neighbourhood are all friendly. They like helping each other when that person has problems.
There is one thing I dislike about it: my neighbourhood is less convenient than most places. I hope it will be more and more convenient. But however, I always love my neighbourhood.
2019-01-10T13:56:13Z
...Oinyn... | Vote: 0
- [Duyệt]
2019-01-11T04:53:26Z
_shii.25 | Vote: 0tính đến ngày bao nhiêu hả !?
2019-01-10T14:03:04Z
_shii.25 | Vote: 0
Tên acc: _shii.25
Số thứ tự: 019
"Hometown" are two very sacred words for people. That's where we were born and grew up. Anyway, the children go far the countryside still miss their hometown. My hometown is very peaceful and beautiful. The fresh air with vast sky. There are vast coffee gardens when the wind passes and carries a little aroma of fragrant coffee. There are blue rivers and crosses that are sure bridges. People in my hometown are very hardworking, friendly and kind. People help each other when they get stuck. They also share with each other the joys and sorrows. Here, I have a lot of new friends. On the afternoon, I often go with friends to climb trees, pick fruits, go fishing and fly kites. In the evening, we invite each other to catch fireflies, catch grasshoppers, crickets, ... It's really interesting and fun. I really love my hometown. Although not often visiting my hometown, my hometown image will never disappear from my mind.
Bài viết vẫn sơ sài quá > < Hông có thời gian viết nên thông cảm nhae :3
2019-01-10T14:35:01Z
_shii.25 | Vote: 0
Tên acc: _shii.25
Số thứ tự: 019
"Hometown" are two very sacred words for people. That's where we were born and grew up. Anyway, the children go far the countryside still miss their hometown. My family regularly visits my hometown. My hometown is very peaceful and beautiful. The fresh air with vast sky. There are vast coffee gardens when the wind passes and carries a little aroma of fragrant coffee. There are blue rivers and crosses that are sure bridges. The specialty of my hometown is "Coffee". It is a popular drink not only of some Asian countries but also of Europe. My hometown has many beautiful scenes like Elephant Waterfall, Xuan Huong lake, Linh An pagoda, ...People in my hometown are very hardworking, friendly and kind. People help each other when they get stuck. They also share with each other the joys and sorrows. They work very hard but they never complain about it.Here, I have a lot of new friends. On the afternoon, I often go with friends to climb trees, pick fruits, go fishing and fly kites. In the evening, we invite each other to catch fireflies, catch grasshoppers, crickets, ... It's really interesting and fun. I really love my hometown. I hope that my hometown life will gradually improve.
Bài viết vẫn sơ sài quá > < không có thời gian viết nên thông cảm nhae :3
2019-01-10T14:46:37Z
...Oinyn... | Vote: 0
- [Duyệt]
2019-01-11T04:53:10Z
HNguyen_ | Vote: 0Bạn ơi, hạn chót nộp bài là khi nào vậy, cảm ơn?!? Vì mình bận quá nên có thể tối CN mình mới nộp bài đc ạ!
2019-01-10T15:21:00Z
...Oinyn... | Vote: 0
- Ngày 12/1. Ừm tớ ra hạn là ngày 12/1 nhưng nếu bận quá thì bạn để sáng CN nộp cũng được :) Tối mình Tổng Kết nữa.
2019-01-11T04:55:24Z
HNguyen_ | Vote: 0Cảm ơn bạn nhiều ạ!
2019-01-11T14:20:56Z
_LoveBlackpink_ | Vote: 0• Tên acc: LeNguynThuT6 • Số thứ tự: 002
• BÀI LÀM: "Hometown" are two divine call. It is where we were born, grow up and mature. People who live far away from home always remember their homeland. My hometown is a countryside associated with cultivation. The air here is so fresh. The sky is blue and vast. Golden rice fields hatched and roared with laughter in the harvest days. The gentle winds breeze makes us feel extremely comfortable and like sinking into the magical space of paradise. The weather is good. People here are gentle, hardworking and hospitable. They always help neighbors when they encounter difficulties. The houses in my hometown are beautiful. People grow many tall and big trees. In my hometown, there are many traditional dishes. They are so delicious and fragrant. However, there is a problem I dislike. Nowaday, there are many motorbikes and cars, so the streets are crowded polluted during the day. I hope it will be cleaner and fresher in the future. My hometown is really wonderful and fantastic. I love it so much. I will introduce my hometown with everyone in the world and they will visit here.
P/S: Nếu sai thì mong bạn sửa giúp mình.
2019-01-11T03:49:16Z
_LoveBlackpink_ | Vote: 0
- Tên acc: LeNguynThuT6.
- Số thứ tự: 026.
BÀI LÀM:
"Hometown" are two divine call. It is where we were born, grow up and mature. People who live far away from home always remember their homeland.
My hometown is a countryside associated with cultivation. The air here is so fresh. The sky is blue and vast. Golden rice fields hatched and roared with laughter in the harvest days. The gentle winds breeze makes us feel extremely comfortable and like sinking into the magical space of paradise. The weather is good. People here are gentle, hardworking and hospitable. They always help neighbors when they encounter difficulties. The houses in my hometown are beautiful. People grow many tall and big trees. In my hometown, there are many traditional dishes. They are so delicious and fragrant.
However, there is a problem I dislike. Nowaday, there are many motorbikes and cars, so the streets are crowded polluted during the day. I hope it will be cleaner and fresher in the future. My hometown is really wonderful and fantastic. I love it so much. I will introduce my hometown with everyone in the world and they will visit here.
P/S: Nếu bài có lỗi sai nào thì mong bạn sửa giúp mình.
2019-01-11T03:55:01Z
...Oinyn... | Vote: 0
- [Duyệt]
2019-01-11T04:52:32Z
[deactivated user]| Vote: 0
Tên acc: VenusHami
Số thứ tự: 025
My family has four people: my mother, my father, my little brother and me. I am like a normal person in the world. I have mom, dad, siblings and especially, I have my own hometown. It is Xuan Son Nam-a small village in Dong Xuan. It has the own beauty such as: paddy-fields, rivers, lakes, and so on. When I was a little child, I usually ran along the rivers and smelled the fragrant of rice, i had a lot of memories about it. My hometown is far from the place that I live, it is about 45 kilometres long so i cannot visit my hometown usually. The people here are friendly, helpful and sociable. We always live in peace. When i return to my hometown, we always gather together and have a delicious meal. At New Year's Eva, we often watch the firework on TV. I think this is the most interesting thing i have try. I love my hometown and my family so much.
bài của mình chưa được hay cho lắm, ngữ pháp với cả từ vựng của mình còn non. mong bạn thông cảm ạ. (mình nói vậy không phải vì mình muốn bạn bỏ qua. mong bạn cứ chấm thẳng tay ạ.)
2019-01-11T06:05:25Z
...Oinyn... | Vote: 0
- [Duyệt]
2019-01-11T06:41:19Z
...Kirtyy2k6... | Vote: 0
Tên acc: -...Bip...-
Số thứ tự: 006
I am glad for this opportunity to introduce myself. My name is -...Bip...- . Everyone calls me Tit. I'm 15 years old. I'm a student. My family has 5 people: my father, my mother, two brothers and me.
“Homeland is only one person
Just like a mother
If anyone does not remember homeland
That a person will not be large "
I am currently living in Ho Chi Minh City or it is also known as Saigon with my family. I really love my country, because it’s a peaceful country and has many beautiful places. If you have any occasion to visit here, you will never forget. Saigon is a very crowded city, and it is seemed that it never sleeps. Since this is a gathering place for many people with different culture throughout the country, the life-style here is always filled with interesting and new things. It is a harmonious combination of modern and classic things. We can easily find the ancient buildings in the middle of the city or right behind the high buildings are several small alleys with the values that have existed for so long. People here work very hard, but they also enjoy life a lot. Saigon people – or we usually call them Saigonners love to explore food, take pictures, and gather with friends at coffee shops. The food here is very abundant, from the regional dishes to the famous international dishes. Tourists love to explore street food here, and Saigon has a lot of features that we should not miss. This city is considered as the heart of the South, and we can find almost everything here. Saigon is a warm place, and it will treat those who really want to find opportunities here well.
Saigon is the largest city in Vietnam with an extremely huge amount of residents, so almost every street and corner in the center of the city is always bustling. Saigon is famous for its skyscrapers and crowded malls. People love to do shopping, so every weekend the shopping malls are always full of shoppers. The life-style here is very fast and hurried, but people try to spend their free time in the evenings hanging around the streets. Saigon at night is very beautiful, people love to gather in the coffee shops or sit in river banks that go along the streets. My friends and I usually hang out in the evening, and we would like to find as many different places to eat as possible. Along with the beauty, Saigon is also famous for delicious fool, and it is felt like that the street food is usually better than one in big restaurants. There are so many things left to say about this lovely city, and we can only see the rest of it by exploring it ourselves. I love my hometown and my family so much.
Thank you very much
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kimmyungsoo-.- | Vote: 0~Tên acc : kimmyungsoo-.- ~ số thứ tự :021 <sub>~</sub> Hello, my i introduce my self. My name is cun. I'm twelve years old, i'm in grade seven ,class 7/3 at ND secondary school. I live at 46/1 Hung Vuong street with my fammily. My family has four member : my parents, my brother and me. We are very happy. Where i life is very quiet and i need that quiet to study. I love animal because they are very lovely and friendly. And how about you ? Do you love animal ? And if anyone ask : what in the future will you do, how will you answers ? For me, i answer i love drawwing and maybe i'll be a famous artist. The end, please choose me. Thank you very much................T~T
2019-01-11T11:51:34Z
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2019-01-11T12:26:08Z
kimmyungsoo-.- | Vote: 0Các bạn bày mk cách xuống dòng đc ko ?chứ mk làm mãi mà ko đc T~T T~T
2019-01-11T12:02:50Z
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- Chỉ cần cách xuống dòng thôi mà bạn?!
2019-01-11T12:25:50Z
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2019-01-11T12:29:48Z
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- Where I was born and grew up in Hanoi. The city’s children is a growing modern city. Roads wander wide. The way the two buildings grow up san suicide. Hanoi’s most beautiful at night, then coats the city as a new coat. Where Where electric lighting as I am sa. They are the parents area for walking in the West Lake. In the air is cool and fresh. Lake blue, like a cosmic giant carpet. Coastal lakes are found standing tilt touches down in their reflected nothing more of a young woman doing coast. I am very proud of themselves as citizens Hanoi. The people of Hanoi elegance and hospitality.
- P/s: Thank you very much ^-^
2019-01-11T12:34:19Z
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2019-01-11T12:48:18Z
Sweet.cake. | Vote: 0Tên acc : Cong.dang.yeu
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Where I was born was a very peaceful countryside. The muddy and winding roads make it hard for people to overcome, that is, before the road is covered with cement, people's travel is now easier. Early in the morning, neighbors prepare fresh vegetables for sale at the market. When the sun rises, on the dreamy fields are farmers who are busy working to prepare for the next crop. Next to the small river, there is a stone bridge crossing, every day students go to school by this road, on both sides of the river are shady trees. There are also high mountains, on the top of the mountain often visited by white clouds. When foreigners visit this countryside, people here are warmly welcomed. In the afternoon, around the river bank, there are children who often come here to play. When the sun was about to set, we watched the sunset together, among the sunsets I watched, probably the most beautiful here. When I recall those times, I promised my heart that I will definitely not forget where I was born!2019-01-11T13:09:20Z
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2019-01-12T04:02:59Z
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Hello everybody , my name is Pham Vi Ngoc Han . I'm a student at Yen THang secondary school , I'm 12 years old . I live in a small house , in the countryside in Nam Dinh province with my family of 4 people : my mother , my father , my brother and me .There are many beautiful places to visit like : Tran Temple , Phu Day , Hai Thinh , QUat Lam beach . It also has many famous foods such as : Pho Bo , Bun dua , banh cuon ,... My hometown is not very big , but it's very beautiful and peaceful . There aren't many tall buildings , big supermarket , beautiful park ,... It only has some small shops , a clinic , a pretty school and a small market . The people here is hard-working , kind , friendly and funny . They often help me when necessary . Every day , they usually work on the farms from early morning to late night . My hobby is reading books and learning English . I often read books in my freetime and leaning English in the evening . At school . I learning many subjects , such as : MAths , Biology , English ,... I like English the most beacause it's very important for my future job . And you , what about your favorite subjects , where are you from , what's your hobby . Please tell me . That's all about me , thanks for your reding.
2019-01-11T14:13:56Z
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2019-01-12T04:03:05Z
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I come back here every day, but I still don't want to go. But I have to go back to Australia, where I was born and grew up. When I went out, I was fascinated by the "Love Valley". Seeing that, she told me a bit. "In the 30s, the Indochinese governors and French lovers often chose the context for a date, and then they just put it" Vallée d'Mour, every time they started. Month, she brought me here again.
In the middle of Da Lat city, Ho Xuan Hung is very beautiful. There are flower gardens and green pine forests all year round. Pine covers the hillsides, slopes and runs along the roads in Da Lat city with many waterfalls: Cam Ly, Po Ren, ... Each waterfall has a beautiful beauty.
I come back here every day, but I still don't want to go. But I have to go back to Australia, where I was born and raised.
2019-01-11T14:25:02Z
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2019-01-12T04:03:09Z
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Hello everyone! My name is_iampfw11_
. I am 12 years old and I study at Thanh Nhan secondary school. I was born and grew up in a small district called NG. My hometown is beautiful and peaceful. The air here is very fresh that beneficial to your health. People in my hometown are very friendly, hospitable and kind. If someone has a problem, they will help immediately. My hometown is famous for its traditional food which called "Banh Gai". It's very delicious so many people from other places like it very much. Also, my hometown has a small museum which displays handicrafts pictures,...there you can explore my history's hometown. There are many amusements for kids to play with others. It's the place where you can enjoy many great and fantastic games. Some of the attractions are Hoa Trau restaurant, Hong Trau restaurant, Manh Hoach's Chicken,...which attracts many tourists every year. My hometown has an ancient temple called Tranh temple where we honor a great person: "Quan Lon Tuan Tranh". NG district has many beautiful places that I can't tell them all. The more I love my hometown very much and I hope it becomes more beautiful and more modern in the future.Thank you for your reading!
2019-01-11T15:39:38Z
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2019-01-12T04:03:14Z
Garino3.0 | Vote: 0bạn ơi giờ còn tham gia được không?
2019-01-12T04:22:14Z
Binn. | Vote: 0Bây giờ ko tham gia đc nữa đâu !!!
2019-01-12T08:20:22Z
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2019-01-12T10:01:14Z
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In each person, everyone has a homeland, a place where the umbilical cord is cut. Me too, I love my hometown, my source with all my heart. My hometown is Hanoi capital.
When it comes to Hanoi, many people will talk about capital at bustling pace. But for me, Hanoi has a calm and own beauty that is nowhere to be found. On autumn days, the fragrant and fragrant flowers smelled of milk flowers from the street corners, I often ran to the alley to enjoy this scent. I love both Hanoi people, they are polite, elegant in their eating, speaking and behavior. They are humorous and sociable, in essence, the Hanoi people still have patriotism and love the capital
Hanoi is famous for its historical relics such as the Ly Dynasty One Pillar Pagoda with the image of "lotus" "national flower of the nation. Or Van Mieu Quoc Tu Giam, Ho Guom with the legend of "paying the sword" of Le Loi, ... many other historical relics show that Hanoi still retains the soul and definition of the Vietnamese people.
Night. Hanoi, it's a bit chilly, light up is a street lamp, a light, bringing the colors of the night, of Hanoi night. After a day of working with worries and fatigue, the night came to be a relaxing and comfortable place for me to be with my family and relatives. It's just a walk together, walking together to admire the Sword Lake at night, but it's all a habit, a lifestyle of Hanoi people and mine. Laughter said, car, radio on both sides of the road made Hanoi like youthful, full of vitality.
In my eyes, Hanoi is like the first love of childhood. I love Hanoi not only because it is famous, beautiful, modern. Simply because I loved Hanoi right from my childhood. So, "Hanoi is always in my heart ♥️"
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2019-01-12T11:19:15Z
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2019-01-13T09:24:57Z
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Hello! My name is Tarina. I'm fourteen years old. I was born and raised in Ho Chi Minh City or it is also known as Saigon. The weather in Saigon is milder than in other places. It is a very crowded city and it is seemed never sleeps. Because this is a gathering place for many people with different culture throughout the country, the life-style here is always filled with interesting and new things. It is a harmonious combination of modern and classic things. There are usually many visitors here. Therefore, Ho Chi Minh City is one of the famous tourist destinations of Vietnam and internationally. There are many famous landmarks here: Notre Dame Cathedral, Ben Thanh Market, Nha Rong Habour, Reunification Palace, etc. Saigon is famous for its skyscrapers and crowded malls: Bitexco financial tower, Vincom, etc. People here very friendly. They work very hard, but they also enjoy life a lot. Saigon people – or we usually call them Saigonners love to explore food, take pictures, and gather with friends at coffee shops. The food here is very abundantand and very delicious. Tourists love to explore street food here, and Saigon has a lot of features that we should not miss. This city is considered as the heart of the South, and there are so many things left to say about this lovely city, and we can only see the rest of it by exploring it ourselves.
Thanks for reading.
2019-01-12T13:12:58Z
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2019-01-13T09:24:50Z
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Hi!My name is NIGHT.CORE.I'm 13 years old.I was born and raised in Ha Noi city.The place I was born was really beautiful .I love my hometown very much and I hope it becomes more beautiful and more modern in the future. I am a person who loves life and is optimistic. In the school, teachers and friends love me and at home everyone in my family loves me. My family has 5 people: parents, brother, grandmother and me . My mother and my father are doctors and police. Until Tet, my parents didn't spend as much time with me as before, so now my grandmother care for me.My favourite food are sausages, sushi, hamburger, chips, fried chicken, rice, pasta,bread,meat,pork , beef,........ My favorite drinks are coke, sprite, strawberry juice,orange juice,lemonade,apple juice, milk tea,......... I like to sleep late and wake up It's too late (laugh). Because of such a weird hobby, I'm often late for school (crying). My favorite type movies are romantic movies and horror movies, I don't like comedies very much. I wanted to become an translator and I can earn about 60 million months. I know it is difficult to fulfill that dream but i will try to learn to make that wish come true. Until Tet, I hope my family will enter a new year full of joy and success in life.And I also wish you good luck and happiness in 2019 ~
2019-01-13T04:00:02Z
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2019-01-13T09:24:48Z
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My full name is ĐHN. I am quite old (laugh) so I will not tell my real age in this paragraph. I live in TCN village, CT district and TG province – it is a lovely place with peaceful atmosphere where lots of foreigners visit it sometimes. My family has 4 members include my dad – a doctor, mom – a pharmacist, my elder sister – just received MA degree of Germany last month and me.
Personally, I am not a beautiful girl or an ugly girl. I am normal, humorous, friendly and rather smart. My zodiac is Aries so my character is hardly telling lies. My zodiac also shows that I will be leading a company in the future. Especially, as being Aries, I have an interest in watching politics and sometimes dream about attending to a conference and become a Political leader. But everytime I dream about that, my mom always rejects my "tiny" dream. And yes, after that time, I have never dreamed about that again. As I belong to Aries, in my free time, even the weather is good or bad, I always love watching the various movements of clouds (my personality is so weird right?).
Moreover, I sometimes wonder that if I would be able to find a new kind of coal or not in the prospective life. And that's one of my favourite things to reflect upon if I could receive a proposal from the government to discover once in my life. In general, it would be awesome if I had a chance to perform and try once. Therefore, I love myself very much and I always try to study hard to make my family happy and please them.
2019-01-13T09:50:52Z
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2019-01-13T10:24:18Z
_Bad_ | Vote: 0cho mình hỏi xíu , nick trc kia của bạn là Shinohara-Akari phải hông ạ ???
2019-01-13T13:47:01Z
n._achi | Vote: 0hu hu định tối nay làm mà lại khoá mất rồi
2019-01-13T11:38:50Z
levantuanminh | Vote: 0My family have four people such as mom, dad, sister and me. At present, customs and tradition are very important in the life of each person. Like other family, my family also have our own traditions and customs. There is a tradition in our family of seeing the fireworks in on New Year's Eve. Everyone in my family went to the square and watched the fireworks in the night sky. We did that together for every year. In the modern life, there are so many people moving to live in city. Because the city have a lot of people so they can develop the economy for the family. At present, few people live in the countryside. However, I still like living in the countryside. We can run around the vast field, swimming in the rivers, collec many vegetables in the afternoon or in the summer. Morever, we can enjoy the fresh air and peaceful space. The people in the countryside are very kind, generous and friendly. Because they can live a happy life at here. I really enjoy living here, but maybe my future is going to live in the city but I never forget about the time when I lived here. Because this place is so familiar and close to my life.
2019-03-23T14:37:02Z