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Practice writing in English / Tập viết tiếng anh

phoenix7777777
Vote: 13

Write a short paragraph about your pet. In English (you are allowed to add a Vietnamese translation if you prefer). Good luck!

Viết một đoạn văn ngắn về con vật cưng của bạn. Bằng tiếng Anh (bạn được phép thêm bản dịch tiếng Việt nếu muốn). Chúc may mắn!

You are also welcome to explain to me what's incorrect about the Vietnamese Google translation so I can change it. :)

2021-08-11T14:40:40Z

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aworldinatree | Vote: 3

My favorite pet? I will reveal it to you shortly.

I like cats, they are very cute. The fur of the cats is very smooth. Especially, they are very attractive with their appearance. Moreover, the agility legs and the blue eyes like clouds are also pluses. But cats even steal food from the kitchen and are very ferocious at times. With children, they're good and interesting. I think so. Many people think they are gluttonous, but that is just a cat's instinct. In short, cats are my favourite pet, even though they have many advantages and disadvantages.


Thú cưng ưa thích ca tôi? Tôi s bt mí cho bn ngay sau đây.

Tôi thích mèo, chúng rất dễ thương. Bộ lông của những con mèo rất mượt mà. Đặc biệt, chúng rất thu hút với vẻ ngoài của mình. Hơn nữa, đôi chân nhanh nhẹn và đôi mắt xanh như mây cũng là những điểm cộng. Nhưng mèo thậm chí còn ăn trộm thức ăn từ nhà bếp và đôi khi rất hung dữ. Với trẻ em, chúng tốt và thú vị. Tôi nghĩ vậy. Nhiều người nghĩ chúng háu ăn nhưng đó chỉ là bản năng của loài mèo. Tóm lại, mèo là vật nuôi yêu thích của tôi, mặc dù chúng có những ưu điểm và nhược điểm.

2021-08-11T15:32:50Z


phoenix7777777 | Vote: 1

I don't know any cats with jet black eyes... must be a special kind. :)

I really like cats, they have a certain elegance about them and it can be very soothing to watch them sleep, purring, some softly and others very loud.

2021-08-11T15:49:19Z


aworldinatree | Vote: 0

Sorry. I will edit my post. Can I write shining black eyes ?

2021-08-12T01:12:49Z


phoenix7777777 | Vote: 1

You can write whatever you like... if you prefer to change your comment it would be best to do so in a new comment or show in some other way that it's obvious that you've changed it.

What I meant is that normal house cats usually have either blue, green or golden eyes or a mix https://www.felineliving.net/cat-eye-colors/ but if your (imaginary) cat has black eyes, that's up to you.

2021-08-12T04:36:10Z


aworldinatree | Vote: 1

Thank you. I saw a black cat in my grandparents' house, it has a black eye. That is why I write like that.

2021-08-12T04:41:54Z


phoenix7777777 | Vote: 1

You're welcome. Sounds like an interesting cat.

It's merely an exercise to get participants to think about how they would phrase a certain sentence in English, which is why I, unlike the other one with the picture, am not correcting anyone's sentences, unless asked. Because it's more important to be able to communicate with others than to worry about perfect English (not saying that mine is either). As long as people understand what you're saying/writing, you're good to go. The more often one tries to write in English, the more they'll learn, unlike when always using a translator.

2021-08-12T05:19:04Z


ThnThinNgh | Vote: 2

My pet is fish, there are many fish in my fish tank. They're koi fish and guppies. They eat too much food and you can call it " Koi fish and guppies as pig :) " it can eat a jar of fish food in a day. Its hobby is swimming near the pump and also like wall lights ¬ v ¬ and only go tosleep when the lights are off. UwU

That is my pet, they're fish but it like a pig ¬ v ¬ /

2021-08-11T15:05:25Z


phoenix7777777 | Vote: 2

Sounds like they're really fun to watch. :)

I have a little parakeet, a blue and white bird, that likes to sing all day and fly around the room, and enjoys sitting close to the window watching the birds outside, until he gets hungry and goes back to his cage to eat/drink or sleep. He likes slices of apple and cucumber.

2021-08-11T15:22:48Z


Dn-TRex | Vote: 1

Hello, I have a bird. His name is "ToTo". It have a white plumage. It has a small beak and that beak is very cute. My bird has two tiny feets and two round eyes. It usually eats pea and rice grain. Its hobby is clean, a nice barn. Birds often symbolize peace so I love it very much. Birds are very gentle, always living in harmony with each other. My bird is very cute, I love it very much.


Xin chào, tôi có một con chim. Tên anh ấy là "ToTo". Nó có một bộ lông màu trắng. Nó có một cái mỏ nhỏ và cái mỏ đó rất dễ thương. Con chim của tôi có hai chân nhỏ và hai mắt tròn. Nó thường ăn hạt đậu và hạt gạo. Sở thích của nó là sạch sẽ, một cái chuồng đẹp. Chim thường tượng trưng cho hòa bình nên em rất yêu quý. Các loài chim rất hiền lành, luôn sống hòa thuận với nhau. Chim của em rất dễ thương, em rất thích nó.

2021-08-12T00:43:10Z


phoenix7777777 | Vote: 1

Hi. What kind of bird is ToTo? Yes, they are always cleaning themselves as well during the day, making sure all their feathers are clean and in place. Very cute indeed.

2021-08-12T04:42:32Z


aworldinatree | Vote: 0

Thank you very much for these posts !

2021-08-11T14:48:04Z


dolarterno | Vote: 0

ok

2021-08-13T08:58:47Z